here's an idea
just how small are we
compared to it
if we were to look at ourselves
from x number of miles away
could we even see ourselves
who knows
just how big is it
who can really say
does it even have an end
all we can do is just
keep looking out there
what all is out there
i certainly couldn't tell you
there is far more than
we could even imagine
all we can do is
guess
if we could even
comprehend any of these
what would that be like
to know that you were among
the smallest of things
who could say
Author notes
"Outer Space". I've thought a lot about these things, and all I have accomplised of it so far is a really bad headace.OOWW!!
Written August 17th, 2005
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Thanks for entering my contest!
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I like this poem
But maybe you can add capitals? :/
I often think about this too xD
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thank you, of course you can add me to your favs, the more the merrier!!YAY!!!=)). i hope to read some of your peices as well. thanx again, write you soon.
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Great
Hi,Himura Kenshin:
I really like your poem's they are full of great caring by the poet I will be sure read more of your work,May I add you to my favs?This poem is very well crafted and you are a very talented poet,well
done.
mrsfoss
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this is really good i like this one as well as the first one i read by u it is really i like both of the ones i read great write dont change
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Well that definitly got me thinking. Cool! Outer Space is weird. We try to understand it, and most of the time all we get is headaches and more questions in return. Anyway, your theme created an unique poem and i really enjoyed reading it.
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I love the thought of outer space! It's so amazing what we can see through telescopes and I would LOVE to be able to feel the weightlessness of being Up There
But I wouldn't do it unless I was in a space ship
Thank you Soooooooooooooooo much for writing something like this! I was hoping someone would!
~Sarah
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