Lost amongst the stars, I wait for your return;
to my heart, my soul, the inner folds of myself
Pour yourself upon me, my dark love
I take upon myself, all of your sinful needs
Your one true desire within the depths of your heart
will always be yours and yours alone to take
She is your One True Mistress, your one and only love
The closest to a woman you will ever be
She knows all of your most vile secrets, and yet
She dares to embrace you fragile and vulnerable as you are
Author notes
Another inspiration of Rose and Zon, Zon copyrighted to Opaque Beauty.
Written August 17th, 2005
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Hehe, nice feeling throughout the poem. Hopefully, he'll realize soon ... something and then go back. Good luck in the contest... and it's still copyright.
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If you read the author's note, you'd know it's not about me at all. And...the person in the poem is the same person, though I guess youi could say that he does get with other people. Anyway, thank you for commenting.
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excellent work
great work flowing and moving. i sence your love for the guy and then feel at the end that he is with someone else? or is that someone else really you? it leaves the imagination make its own path as to how this is written very well done. it was definately short and sweet good luck in the contest -
Thank you.
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I get very lovely feeling trembling through my spine twisting my thoughts to memories. Something that strong is definitely breath taking.
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It can get to be too much on the heart when you're actually in love with this person, and you know they love you too, but they can't let them trust you enough to let that love free. That's what they're going through right now. Thank you for commenting, beautiful.
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It's always a beautiful thought really... to have someone there for you. But sometimes it can get too much... hmmm lol I'll shush now
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I never really thought of couplets when I wrote this.
I always thought couplets had to rhyme. Thanks again.
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Definitely sweet. A wonderful read. I love the couplets. It'd fantastcally written and flows brilliantly.
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