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The Rose

A heart so delicate
a soul abused
A spirit broken
too often used

A man arrives
intentions true
He starts to build
her soul anew

she can't believe
He sees beyond
The broken woman
They have spawned

He sees the beauty
that hides within
He fights the wrath
of original sin

Slowly but surely
like the bud of a rose
She opens herself
she begins to grow

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Written August 17th, 2005

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  • MoonOttawa
    August 18, 2005
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    Thank You Larry.

    Regards,
    moon


  • Rakerman1
    August 17, 2005
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    Any poems with Rose in the tittle are sure to get my attention...I'm glad I found this one. Great R&R make this a pleasure to read.
    Very well done
    Roses
    Larry