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Proclamation Of Silence

Recollection
of sweet embraces;
our bloody laces
left sentimental value
The one visible proclamation
of silence that I am yours
and you are mine, even now,
in this game of cat and mouse;
our hearts beat as one,
our souls are melded as soulmates

Author notes

Also inspired by Sharazon and Rose, Sharazon copywrighted to Opaque Beauty.
Written August 17th, 2005

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  • GauArrowny
    August 20, 2005
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    Well, you're writing lots of poems about/inspired by them... Are you obsessed or something? Nice poem though. Good luck in the contest.
    And it's 'copyright'

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    August 19, 2005
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    Thank you, butterfly.

  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    August 19, 2005
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    I so knew what this was about this time lol. It seems so fitting to explain their complicated love... excellent darling

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    August 18, 2005
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    Sharazon has been my muse as of late. Thanks for commenting.

  • Yunaleska gold member
    August 18, 2005
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    I thought this might be something to do with Rose and Sharazon. It is a beautifully written poem and I love dark. All the better. The structure is unusual which I like as it flows fantastically.
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