I never thought I’d trust again
After all that I’d been through
But all my promises have been broken
Since I have met you
I told myself not to fall in love
To protect myself from pain
But you swept me away so fast
Like a petal in a hurricane
I feel like I’m floating
High up in the sky
But every second I’m terrified
In case you say goodbye
Every word you say to me
Is like an angel speaking
But can you give my heart
What it’s desperately seeking?
I want you to hold me
Make me feel protected
I want to feel cherished
Loved and respected
But every second I think of you
My heart beats a little faster
This adrenaline rush is killing me
I think I’m heading for disaster
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Written August 17th, 2005
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lol thank you x
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woa! this is an amazing poem, nothing compared to mine, thanks for commenting btw, i love the lang and the petal in a hurricane bit, love it! well done, really creates an image! xxxxxxxx
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Awwww i love it! I remembered you showed it me on MSN, it was so pretty!
I told myself not to fall in love
To protect myself from pain
But you swept me away so fast
Like a petal in a hurricane
That was my favourite stanza, im glad your all like this, but yeah you shouldnt get your hopes up too much
Ace write dudette!
Love~
Carla ♥
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Aww this is really sweet!! Bless yaz! I'm glad your all happy again and i know you like him very muchos Just remember to be careful
I liked the rhyming in the poem and the way you set it out, well done Ace poem keep up the awsome work honi
Love a lots
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Awwww hun this is so sad n so so sweet! i love how you've written this and the rhyming is great. Awesome write hunny
i shall applaud it
i'll speak to you later!
Love you!
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I love this poem and it seems full of emotion. I understand where you are coming from, telling yourself that you won't love anyone as you don't want to be hurt again, but if you did live like this, you wouldn't be living to the full, however much it hurts and however much you don't want to be hurt again, its always going to happen, as love is strong.
I really liked the line:
'Like a petal in a hurricane'
i thought that was lovely imagery. well done on the poem and i liked how it flowed because of the ryhme. xxx-xxx
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