Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

When Two Become One

And God said, “Let us make man in our image.”
Male and female he made them,
For it was not good for man to be alone.
He blessed the couple and made them his own.

Standing before the great I AM,
He united them with his love.
Where two people once stood apart
Are now one joined together at the heart.

What has been coupled from above
Let no mortal separate and divide.
Love has bond them together
Today, tomorrow, forever.

Author notes

God joins every couple who stand before him just as he joined Adam and Eve.

( my name is Robert Richley. Friends call me Bob )
Written August 17th, 2005

In a list

A contest entry

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Lencio Rodrigues
    August 20, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    What an excellent poem. Thank you so much for your time. I am sure Sohaib will be very proud of this!

    Many blessings,
    Lencio


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    August 18, 2005
    Edit | Reply

    excellent~

    Beautiful
    Indeed it does say
    Let no man put us under
    I think you have penned this perfect
    Good luck in the contest
    Love n hugs
    Susan~~~