In the dark of the night
He came to me.
Watching me like a hunter
Watches his prey.
Eyes widening
Watching my every move
Jaws clenching
Preparing for the kill
His body tensing
Ready to pounce
Saliva
Running down his chin
I ask
Why me?
Why tonight?
No answer
Did I recieve
The air
Stagnet with fear
My vision
Obscurd by
A dark haze
Just then...
Apiercing pain
As I gasp
Held tight
Feeling the life
Drain from my body
Deeper doth go
The pain
Now accompanied
By pleasure
Overwhelmed
With ecstasy
No longer feeling
The pain
A trickle of blood
Rolls down my neck
My heart pounding
My body quivers
Falling limp
Into your arms
Now bound
To thee forever
A pain
So pleasureable
I have never felt
Before...
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Written August 17th, 2005
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Thank you...I appreciate your comment as well as your offer to check out a new dark site. Not sure it's something I'd be into but I will give it a look nonetheless.....ya never know.
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Def. Dark, but so darn good. I am a member of www.purpleverse.com (it's a dark site, but they welcome works from all walks of life) I think you'd be welcome there as well as like it. They don't necessarily believe in my beliefs, but the people there are wonderful and the sites pretty cool. Check it out alright? Keep this up ok your dark writes are always very chilling.
~Carrie
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there was definitely a dark hidden aspect to this poem in my opinion...kind of as if ur teasing us not telling the whole story but it uses great descriptive imagery and kept my attention the whole way through.
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