It's Derby day, fancy chapeaus
Some quite bizarre, anything goes
Attendees are happy and gay'
Fancy chapeaus, it's Derby day
Jockey's attired in silks so bright
On their steeds, a beautiful sight
By one and all they are admired
In silks so bright jockey's attired'
Horses on track racing real fast
Unfortunately mine is last
Wish I could take my wager back
Racing real fast, horses on track
I now am broke, lost all my cash
I don't know why I was so rash
Til next Derby I'm a sad bloke
Lost all my cash, I now am broke.
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Written August 16th, 2005
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Cute, I love horses!! The rhythm was a little off in this poem, but othere than that Great job!
Ashley -
thats awesome
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Good rhyme, easy to read, entertaining. Enjoyed this.
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LOL you decribed the Ky Derby well although I've never been cute poem!! Me
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