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To Cry





To cry is to be alive.




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Word to describe me: Melancholy.
Written August 16th, 2005

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  • nom de guerre
    December 17, 2006

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    Definitely short. And yes, to cry is to show and to know pain, and we can't know pleasure without knowing what pain is.

  • Ninque-Aiwe
    August 22, 2005
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    Strong. Wow. This is so true, my God. You can only be alive if you feel pain, but it is my firm beleif that you can also only be alive if you feel joy.
    The very best of the Irish luck to you. Amazing, Shan.
    (*feels dumb* They closed it for judging, I can't enter.... meh)
    Edited on Aug 22, 9:25 because 'I'm even more of an idiot'.


  • The Existentialist
    August 17, 2005
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    ok, its one linem but its awesome. sad, but when u are sitting at your computer still wearing the clothes you wore last night, with two fresh bloody scabs and blood all over your left hand, sad is what you. however, i think i certain someone might have gotten it from "to die is to know that you're alive" but i'm to pissed to care so take the fricken applause.