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My Best Friend

You always wipe my tears
You deplete my fears
You`ve loved me for 17 years

When I fell you picked me up
When I was thirsty you filled my cup
Calmed me down when i was fed-up

There is no way i can repay you
I have so much thanks for all the things you do
You are my favorite person to come home to

I need you now more than ever
You have always been so clever
I love you, Mom, it will never stop, never

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Written August 16th, 2005

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  • kayce
    October 17, 2005
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    you really must love her very much since she was there for you when your dad started to treating you two badly.thats beautiful.please keep writing i love your works.


  • robert bolin
    August 16, 2005
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    Beautifuly penned and very heart felt and emotional brought a tear to my eyes when I read about the accident and then the poem
    Very powerful heart and I love the poem your beautiful captivated this poem with a very angelic power of the heavens jus truely amazing.thank you for letting me read your work..


  • trixhighxreject
    August 16, 2005
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    Awww! I love this poem! I too share a special bond with my Mom. This is wonderfully written and i look forward to reading more of your work! Great job!!