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Too Far



Holding hands
A gentle kiss
I wish we could go back
Innocence has escaped us
Like the patience that we lack
I love you now
As I loved you then
But still, I miss it when...

You touch me there
Back seat of the car
I can't breathe
And we start to go too far

Your arm
Around my shoulder
Tell me it's for my protection
Not for your
Satisfaction
I love you now
As I loved you then
Yet still, I miss it when...

You touch me there
Backseat of the car
I can't breathe
And we start to go too far

Love gives and receives
Don't make me feel used
With innocence comes security
Wish we could
Bring back the purity

I love you now
As I loved you then
Lets not forget
When our love was innocent


Author notes

A piece I have been working on for some time.  Not all of it is based on personal experience, as those that know me can probably tell, more based on an idea.

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Written August 16th, 2005

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  • cheergurl
    October 13, 2005
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    thank you!

  • Angeles
    August 16, 2005
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    Wow. When I read this I thought Matt wrote it. And now I have come back to read it againa nd now realize that it was you!. Wow, amazing lyrics.

  • Blessed One
    August 16, 2005
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    pure

    wow..a different write for you...but i like it a lot...i love the lines- I love you now
    As I loved you then
    Yet still, I miss it when...
    glad to see somethin new from ya!! much love..*mac