Life of seven colors
Magical with splendor
Salty and sweetie
Happiness and sorrow
Always we are on the run.
Very difficult to understand
Your peculiar game plan
Overflow and emptiness
Your love and illusion
Just like a dream
And never stopping
Eternal progress step by step
We are just players
With string in your hand
Dancing to your tune
Still moving ahead
Even without understanding
But with the hope
Of your love and laughter!
Author notes
ONE MAN'S CRAP IS ANOTHER MAN'S POETRY
option 3
Written August 16th, 2005
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lol - loved the AN
I thought that this was bright and happy and enjoyed the middle stanza tremendously.
I'm glad that I'm reading this before I leave to go home - thank you for sharing
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Thanks dear for appreciation.
Best wishes.
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This again is brillent writing from you. by the way I do apologi
es for not applaud your poem THE TALE OF A SAD WOMAN, by mistake
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Thank you madame, for the SILVER MEDAL.
Iam very happy.
love
musafir -
I love your use of words here. --Salty and sweetie-- Overflow and emptiness-- Both these phrases have a very nice effect in context with your poem and make it all the more descriptive. Thanks so much for enterring it into my contest. It was very wonderful to read.
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Thanks Jen, for appreciation and good wishes.
Have beautiful time.
musafir -
beautiful-- great job and thanks for entering.
jen -
Nice write... thought provoking!
Enjoyed reading!
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Thanks dear for appreciation.
Have nice time -
This is marvelous the ebb and flow; yin and yang of life. Delightful!
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