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For Eternity

Filled with love
Caught in time
Seperated by distance
Two hearts forever longing
Crying in the night
Praying for  a chance
Hoping for a better tomorrow
To wipe away the tears they weep
To fulfill the desire
To  allow passions to explode
For a love to be free
A day to come
To bond
Become one
Become whole
For the moment
We must live
Time and distance
Winning the on going battle
Hoping to one day
Overcome the seperation
Of pain, longing and sorrow
Buried within the heart and soul
Only to explode
To be released
Unto each other
Expressing undying love
And devotion
For eternity

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Written August 15th, 2005

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  • WhispersFromWithin
    August 15, 2005
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    I love this!!! It describes my situation and I can relate to it very well. I loved the flow it had to it. I tjust was very nice. Good job and keep up the nice poetry!!