i am wordless
as sandpaper
alive as it rains
this december day
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Written January 3rd, 2003
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the first line especially grabbed me inwards
and even though it was only a short read, this did not take away from it at all. -
short and sweet. funny how few words can say so much
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simple but nice
~RaiN~ -
excellent
very nice..loved how out of thousands of objects you picked sandpaper - creative... - sarah - -
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excellent
'i am wordless as sandpaper', truly thought-provoking. i suppose just like sandpaper, love may remould or scratch away what's left. perhaps more can be said. -
excellent
Short but sweet, I like it a lot. I can never get the power into short poems but you've done it very well here. Great job!
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don't touch it!
Umm...isn't it...January?
O well...lol..good write...short but sweet
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