Heart does flutter when you're in sight
Euphoria, it's sheer delight
Words of love I gladly utter
When you're in sight heart does flutter'
My spirits dance, my soul does sing
True happiness to me you bring
When I am in your loving glance
My soul does sing, my spirits dance
We're meant to be forevermore
With much more love and care in store
Still bonded when Heaven we see
Forevermore we're meant to be.
Author notes
April 14, 1951.
Written August 15th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- One Love by ea.
300 points, ended November 10, 2006, 40 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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450 points, ended January 18, 2008, 28 entries
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600 points, ended June 22, 2008, 26 entries
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700 points, ended March 9, 10 entries
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Silver trophy winner
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550 points, ended April 10, 19 entries
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Honorable mention
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What did you think
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awww this is so nice I really like it thanks for entering my poem and good luck
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wow. i love how you switched the words in first nd second line of each stanza. great job.
good luck in contest.
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A very sweet and loving poem...wonderful rhymes! Thank you for the entry!
Az
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Lovely write. I enjoyed reading it!!
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Fantastic. I really love this! Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck. I'm honored to have you show your work here.
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This is so sweet. You show your love very nicely in your beautiful poetry. Best to you in the contest.
Sam
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Excellent
What a touching use of the form. It is great to have such a relationship. May the Lord always bless. Best of luck in the contest.
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I really like the way the poem switches the first line around for the last line. Very clever and it helped to give the poem a nice rhythym. Thank you for the entry!
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Aww this is so sweet. You can really feel how much you love this person. I really liked:
Still bonded when Heaven we see
Forevermore we're meant to be.
My fiance has said that to me many times, not as poetically but it still means a lot.
Thanks for entering and Good luck
Sarah
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Thank you for your lovely entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Beautiful. I love the piece, and the form is excellent. (Good thing about contests when you get to actually see forms in action... I am learning.) Nicely done. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
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Very beautiful write. I loved the emotions expressed in this piece
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This is a lovely poem. A happy love poem that has a joyful tone to it. It is indeed uplifting. Well done dear poet.
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Well Said
You did a wonderful job of expressing you feelings here, I loved the way you rexpress you first line with your last line it gave power to the piece Write on poet
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oh i love it. its great. its unique. thanks for entering and good luck!!
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This is just so beautiful and lovely! Realy well described and certainly fits what I want to say to my Mathew! Thanks so much for entering and good luck too!
Blissful Princess
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cute and tender.... never saw this form before that I know of. I always enjoy your quirky light humor, Billbard. All the best, ea
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very pretty poem, love the word useage also.. many blessings occur with love in the air, thank you for sharing and good luck in our contest..MM
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Awww.. that’s so sweet! Thanks for entering it in my contest!
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A very nice poem. short and sweet.
Jan -
Oh, this is pretty. Thank you for entering it into this contest. Shancy.
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I particularly liked the part about going to heaven and your love still being existent up there. That to me was my favourite part which although is a small part of this poem it spoke volumes to me, i don't quite know either why it did.
michael -
this is a sweet love poem, but i find it rather sad, for all the people i love end up going away, and i feel like this while they're around, but it makes me mad when they leave, anyhow amazing poem and good luck with my contest.
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beautiful
Beautiful..Good luck in the contest
Blessings,
Betty -
I find this very intresting and fun to read. Same with Amy and great lucks to you in the contest! Your words cut deeply into your writing and you're a great writer, really.
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This is a great piece. Very touching, I had a tear in my eye as I read it. Thinking of that truely beautiful feeling this expresses! There is no better feeling than love! And you have expressed it so beautifuly. Such good use of language and it flows perfectly and all the rhymes work really well. One of the best love poems I have read in a long while. Everyone can write a poem about love, but to write a poem about REAL TRUE LOVE is a little more difficult and it's one of those things you can only write well if you have felt TRUE love! So I guess you are one of the lucky ones. This was amzing. Good luck in the contest!
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Very sweet. It flows very nicely. Thanks for entering my contest!
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Sweet one- nice expression of love, I looked at it because of the word quatrains which brings Nostradamus to mind - however there was no connection. I enjoyed it anyway
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This is beautiful! It's a great example of the joy and jubliation of true love, unfettered by the petty pretences of jealousy or distrust.
this is precicely how I feel about my love right now, we're planning on getting handfasted soon, and this poem reminds me of a wedding verse. Really beautiful and touching, it makes me smile simply reading it. Excellent job.
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awww this is so sweet! its an awesome poem! you did a good job writing it! xoxoxoxoxoxoxox tiffany
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