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You Infect My Wounds

you infect my wounds
bringing me more pain
than I've already brought myself
making the damage eternally worse

thank you for your caring ways
the ways i would pretend you treated me
it was all real in my head
but my heart bore the pain that was real

setting my rage ablaze
you loved the reactions you got
didn't you? you loved the way I cried
and yelled at you for belittling me

you infected my wounds
spreading your disease through my veins
it was all apart of the plan
you lead me toward love, you show me pain

thank you so much for hurting me
i hate every ounce of blood in my body
self hatred mixing with hatred for you
and tonight i try my hardest
to bleed out once again, the infection you keep giving me


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Written August 15th, 2005

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  • bleedingarms
    October 5, 2005
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    thanks!


  • Darknight poet
    October 4, 2005
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    rage ablaze yeah i like that good write felt it deep


  • FullyAlive
    August 22, 2005
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    anytime. it was really good!

  • bleedingarms
    August 22, 2005
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    thanks so much!

  • FullyAlive
    August 22, 2005
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    oh wow. i really liked this one. i liked it alot... very deep and emotional. (as FaLLeN CHiLD said)
    keep it up

    bexa

  • emptymind
    August 17, 2005
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    This is an amazing piece of writing i love what u've done.. It reads so well! Great write!!!
    ~*~~Kate~~*~

  • bleedingarms
    August 15, 2005
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    thank you, i sure will


  • FaLLeN CHiLD
    August 15, 2005
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    very deep and emptional. Great write! Keep up the good work!

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