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Mistakes

As the moon
Swallows the suns light
The days end comes swiftly
Another day
Of mistakes made
Another day
Of sorries
Not enough

Each time
I try harder....
Each day
I try my best....
It just never seems
To be enough

Everything I do,
Everything I say,
Is wrong.....

Always
Trying harder,
But never
Hard enough...
Right......
Wrong.....
Who's to say
What which is?

Give your all...
Give your best...
And still
Be wrong.....
Is it even worth
The effort?

Never giving up....
Never giving in....
Yet,
Always wrong.....
Nothing but
Mistakes

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Written August 15th, 2005

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  • Hidden Fortress
    August 15, 2005
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    story of my life... wow... yeah I can totally relate to this poem... awesome job