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Twilight Vows - Sonnet #XIII

Missing image

 By nappiejean

 

 

Sonnet XIII 

 

 

Should twilight, the beginning of an age
appear like a farewell of someone who
you loved so much adored her at that stage,
of life, the apparition seemed so true.
How clearly should a whisper of caress,
remaining like the love affair of light
affirm it close enough a window press
against the intense love of our delight.
Allow the reminisce of fondness tie,
the innuendo both towards us now;
make each be worth contentment to rely
upon the due of notice both somehow!

Pretense sheds no illusion on lost souls'

the longing of response and duly wholes'.

 

Author notes

Written January 3rd, 2003

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  • Andre ben-YEHU
    September 30

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    Bountiful and profound...


    Wise-Wonderful. A poetic bouquet. "Sonnet XIII" paints an ontologic picture, with the colors of life. An intriguing piece in major art.

    I have enjoyed the reading of this "Sonnet XIII". An inspiring and outstanding composition in poetic majestic.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU