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I love you my darling, I love you

my love...
We've been through thick and thin.
Anger and happiness. I doubt that there is anything that could make me stop loving you more and more every day. Every fight we have I learn more and every secret you share lets me know I've earned more trust in you. Every smile lets me know your happy and in the wake of that it makes me happy.I can no longer see my world without you in it. My dreams are all of my life with you and I no longer fear the pain I might feel when I am with you. That is because you told me with your heart that you could never make me cry. I thank you for that. I love you and I will announce it to the world if that is what it takes for you to understand that. I will climb the highest  mountain and shout as loud as I can. All that you will hear my voice far away in your ear saying 'I love you my darling,I love you'. So as we stand here in front of our witnesses confessing our love I will start with a smaller crowd. I love you my darling I love you......

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Written August 15th, 2005

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  • August 23, 2005
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    Congratulations on the trophy. This was very beautifully written. You can honestly tell how you feel.


  • Zeal
    August 15, 2005
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    awwwwwwww