And every minute that passes
In which I sit - staring, waiting
For you to call me and explain
Just drives me more and more insane
Don't you see what you've done?
You've left me standing alone
Outside in the rain and cold
Searching for your face in the crowd
What exactly do I mean to you now?
Obviously not enough for you
To be considerate of my feelings.
This guessing keeps my heart reeling.
I felt foolish for believing you
A lie that you'd be there for me
All the time I would need you to be
And so now we both know the truth
I look around, watching couples
Living their lives together happily
And I keep wondering...
What's keeping you from me?
I don't know what to fear
So I guess what they say is true,
The only thing to fear is fear itself
And if you let it, it will devour you.
Ten more minutes slowly pass through,
Ten more reasons why I should leave you.
Author notes
Yeeah. I jumped to a bunch of conclusions, but I wrote this at the time.
Written August 15th, 2005
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This is so great, this is another one that seems like I wrote it, I guess we've just been through a lot of the same things. Cause we have a lot in common. Great job, again. Lacey
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This is written pretty well, a grand piece dear Jenny. Hmm I dunno what's going on so I can't say much, but I do hope things work out for the best for you!
That's all I can really say.
This is a grand poem, I liked the flow and I LOVED these two lines,
The only thing to fear is fear itself
And if you let it, it will devour you.
very good, very deep.
<3
Melissa
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Good
that was excellent, very much so like my life, keep writing..l8r -
Awwwww, that's very sad. I really liked it though.
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