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A Kiss in Time - Sonnet #XII

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Sonnet  XII

 

The lingering of lips enhanced on each,
so tenderly proportioned had they not,
been subtle to have pressed upon the reach,
to lick the juice, 'temptation' from that spot!
It drizzled such as if the next step froze,
between the next embedded ounce of strength,
a certain time together in that pose,
had promised better things, a kiss at length.
We kissed until the time between us both,
stood still and if it had - was that sedate?
to argue if our bond was one of growth,
concealed in one another's said debate.
The wayward gaze towards your finger tips,
would follow what was next in line, your lips.

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Written January 3rd, 2003

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  • SandraMVeinot
    April 27, 2007

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    Most Romantic Story

    This is the most beautiful one of all...I enjoyed the journey through thy fingertips of time...thank you...

  • Bloody Dawn
    June 30, 2005
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    that was excellent!
    i believe the reason u might not have won
    was probably because the person running the contest could not comprehend the extensive words u used..haha


  • Cream22
    June 24, 2005
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    Mindblowing

    wow this is a very powerful piece and I am so moved I wish my husband could write like that but I will settle for reading yours .

  • XbrokenXforeverX
    May 13, 2005
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    beautiful

    this is a lovely poem.

  • c-town nena617
    April 24, 2005
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    long poem might have a good chance to win the contest good luck!
    *if you want to get closer to win you can comment or applade my poems*


  • ColinSJones
    December 22, 2004
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    i agree ther is a great use of vocab in this which i am afraid is let down by standard phrases such as on a breeze in the opening line...this is a strong poem well above the rest and i feel the opening lets it down

  • BloodRoses
    January 3, 2003
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    excellent

    i love this one. your choice of words and the way you use lnguage to your advantage is very unique. beautiful write!

  • FrangibleEuphony
    January 3, 2003
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    excellent

    I love your use of words!! this is such a great write... keep up the great work!

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