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Without God's Love

How would the stars twinkle without your love
they would fall from the sky
How would we know the truth without your love
the world would fill with lies

How would  we sing your praises without your love
our voices would be silent without song
How would we be kind to others without your love
friends would treat each other wrong

Who would be there to guide us without your love
lost souls would never find their way
Who would speak of Heaven without your love
there would be nothing to say

What would prayer mean without your love
answers would never be found
How would we hear you call our name without your love  
there would never hear a sound

How would life go on without your love
Satan's charms we would not resist
How would the world be without your love
it would cease to exist



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My Summer Thus Far
Written August 15th, 2005

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  • Sunchild
    March 9, 2006
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    Hey, this is awesome! You are so right, this world couldn't last a day without God's love. Thanks for reminding me about that! Keep up the encouragement!

    Your sis in Christ,
    -Sunchild-

  • Heavenly Angel
    November 12, 2005
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    Awesomely beautiful write, my dear friend! Awesome!!! Your pen is dripping such beautiful ink! God bless you, my friend!

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 20, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you so much Don for the wonderful comments you always leave. They are so appreciated. Take care, Sandy

  • Donjo1030
    August 20, 2005
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    excellent

    Beautiful write!!!
    Another wonderful write from your pen. This has beautiful flow and a blessing that touched me when reading it. His love should be emphasized as your poem does it is basis of all of our lives without there would not be forgiveness, hope and life itself would never be the same. Praise god!!!! BRAVO!!!!!!

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 18, 2005
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    I would be honored for you to write a song. Thank you. Take care, God Bless you. Sandy
  • UntouchableBeauty
    August 18, 2005
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    Lovely!!!

    Hey, that was really good. And it's not like i'm any good at singing, and i don't even have a band, but do you think i can take that poem and try to make a song out of it? Just for the fun of it? I ever got decides to surprise me..... and i get my second greatest desire of being a singer. I will make sure to give you the credit. But besides that all, can i try to make a song? It was really good!!!

  • josh-13
    August 17, 2005
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    Amen to this. This is amazing, another piece thats worthy of praise, love is the greatest gift, It is what binds us. It's the glue that holds us together. I loved this poem. It explains so much, truly amazing.

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 16, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Linda, Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 16, 2005
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    Thank you Michael. I always enjoy your comments. God Bless you. Stay safe. Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 16, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you for your nice comment. So glad you enjoyed it. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 16, 2005
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    Thank you so much for ereading my poem and leaving a nice comment on it. I appreciate it. take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 16, 2005
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    Thank you so much Mary for the wonderful comment. I am glad you enjoyed this poem. It was a joy to write. God Bless you and Andy. It was a pleasure to talk to you yesterday. I look forward to more conversation. I am still praying for you. Take care and God Bless you, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 16, 2005
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    Thank you for the nice comment. I appreciate it. This was a pleasure to write for your contest. Take care, Sandy
  • The Pickle
    August 15, 2005
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    This was really great! I don't have much to say, besides great job and thanks for entering! The Pickle AKA Zach
  • Praise his name
    August 15, 2005
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    Wonderful write here my friend this is so true.
    I can't wait to read the next.
    God bless
    Mary

  • Windworder gold member
    August 15, 2005
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    Ahhhh, faith, hope and love and the greatest of these is LOVE! Well said and thought provoking. We often forget that the true basis for love is God above as exampled by Jesus.

  • Watuwant silver member
    August 15, 2005
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    This has a very melodic, calming effect on the reader. Well done.
    peace
    doug

  • Donjo1030
    August 15, 2005
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    excellent

    Absolutely Beautiful Sandy!!!
    What a wonderful message of what this world be like without his love. Especially the way it is now. His love has changed many of us and shown us what love really can be all we have to do is open our hearts to it. Praise God. Another great write and such a pleasure to read. BRAVO!!!!!

  • Arsenic-
    August 15, 2005
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    Lovely poem. Where would we be, indeed.

    Michael
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