Life is a Road,
Often Rocky,
Twisting and Turning,
Climbing and
Falling,
With its Detours,
Freeways,
And Crossroads
Of Decision.
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Just peeked into that scary place I call my head and this is what I saw.
Written August 15th, 2005
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it is short and sweet poem. our life is like a rollar coaster we go up and down or go foreward or backwards or......
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It's so short and sweet. I like the layout of it, it's not straight, which is right because your poem talks about the twisting road and turning road e.t.c. It's simple, it hasn't got any very complicated or long words, they would be out of place here.
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this is great and so short, precise, to the point, this is freeflow i gather lolxxxxxx
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Very good use of words , i like the way you interpret the way of life into "road like "signs But it is also very true ,, we have all had to crossroads somewher in our lives ..I like this -
This is a great metaphorical poem. It sums up all one can say about life's times in one short poem.
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