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Pari Passu




hollow spaces
   - fills the deprived
             soul

 wronged again and again
    yet stubborn to never
 let go...

a thread that binds us
   intertwined with trust
faith,understanding
  strengthen by the twist
         of oneness
a thread that was spun
   by us...

unprocessed thoughts
  bluttered randomly
a right that existed
    - a misconception by me

affable
   - with no strings attached
 engorged with never ending
    assurance...


Author notes

Random conversations within one's head after a squabble.

WORK IN PROGRESS
Written August 15th, 2005

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  • Pisces Pond
    August 15, 2005
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    Pari Passu means something of the same rate or equal ...

    Well I didnt intentionally make the font dark. Just that I liked the color i guess..


  • transcendental baby gold member
    August 15, 2005
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    P.S. What does pari passu mean? Lazy sally ... I should look it up

  • transcendental baby gold member
    August 15, 2005
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    Bravo Pi! I've had conversations like that too ... ones you don't know how to say ... but hope the other person understands ... you did a wonderful job of discribing that here! And changing the fonts so they don't show was a cool move too!!! It hightens the sense of hollow spaces implied Least that's my take on it