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Simplicity

See with your eyes, kiss with your lips, embrace with your arms and love with your heart.

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I think life is a lot more simple than people make it out to be.
I'm inconsequential.
Written August 14th, 2005

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  • fears of joy
    August 15, 2005
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    very simple, i've heard this line somewhere before, but i can't remember where. i like it very much though.