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Love's not, Love's Knot - Sonnet #IV

                         Sonnet IV 

 

IF I considered best what I now know -
Has brief denied me long since asking why,
This wonderful aspire as love knots go
Appreciates’ you more than long gone by.
Beholden, no less likelihood undo;
The task of equal share as love knots hold,
Includes the untied version of accrue,
To heed the warning caution first foretold.  
That once the knot between us tied can both,
Become a question asked what answers range
That we belong drawn lots instilling growth,
By trust, exhibit loathes in part exchange.
She far exceeds the ravishing past tense,
Adorned to love's exceeding worn immense.

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Written January 3rd, 2003

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  • HippieKid
    January 1, 2005
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    Deep, very deep. Your use of words was diffrent and I like it. Specialy rhe way you ended it. You are in deed a great poet.

    ~Hippie~

    Thanks for entering my contest.


  • LillithCrowe
    August 30, 2004
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    first of all thank you for the WONDERFUL comment.
    second of all that was an amazing poem. very well written.
    i loved it. great write

  • mushika
    January 3, 2003
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    neutral

    I need to leave this computer soon, but when I return tonight I will be reading more of your poems. I thought this was great. One thing: I have always seen it spelled purgatory- don't know if that was intentional or a UK US divided by a common language thing or just a typo.

    Excellent poem though - had a Baudelaire feel to it


  • Thathom
    January 3, 2003
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    excellent

    A brilliant poem again. Really like your work here. You obviously put alot of thought into your work and don't just spout crapness :)