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Reluctant Pose - Sonnet # III

  Sonnet III 

 

And with restriction does the pose withold
my having nothing on, consume more thought,
completely overawed by this distraught
affection posing has, I have been bold.
You leer at the suggestion laying down,
has now disrupted things I do declare,
us having an affair, or worse, I dare
conveniently towards you, move thy gown?
If shyness were sufficient to thine need,
then nothing, I mean nothing more I pray
would lead me to this sin of disarray,
to paint you. Is it not enough I plead?
And whilst assuring both to morals sound
I think it would be best, you turn around.

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Written January 3rd, 2003

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  • Canto-Brasileiro
    October 22, 2007
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    Back...
    Read it twice, and both times I got the feel of a person lost in the dark of their own doubts and despair.
    Also, and that is not directly related with the first thought, made me think of a situation where we find ourselves trapped inside a world we didn't choose or desire. Fear, pain, darkness, often we fight to get out of them, and yet, it seems that forces beyond our control keep on pushing them into our lives.

    Wondering if that was a moment of burst or written specifically to one or another assignment.


  • Canto-Brasileiro
    October 21, 2007

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    Wow I found one that seems not ever been in a contest
    Bookmarking for later 'cause now I have to watch the oven.


  • Cream22
    June 24, 2005
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    amazing

    I love it you are a very talented writer keep it up


  • Libby Cullen
    July 18, 2004
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    Great

    Very nice. Great poem. It flowed very nicely. And thanks for commenting on my story.

    Mel


  • InxomniaXpiral
    January 24, 2003
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    excellent

    i really liked this poem, but i'm gonna have to come back and read it when i'm head's not in the gutter cuz once i read 'x-files,' i kept imagining Gillian Anderson. . . man, i'm can be such a little dyke sometimes! LOL

    lizbian

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