She dreams of a magical place,
where nobody knows her face.
Where stars sparkle and never fade,
and you can sit together undisturbed in the shade.
Where flowers so delicate brighten the scene,
holding onto something so precious to redeem,
the acts of her poison and shades of her sorrow.
Where she doesn't have to hope for tomorrow,
but is sure it will come,
and she won't be staring down a loaded gun.
But all she can do is dream of the scene;
the place of her hearts belonging,her dream.
Carried away by the smile of her true love,
to the magical place that resembles a dove.
Until she reaches her final destination,
being with her lover, she seeks salvation,
And she knows it will come,
she knows it will be.
She will see, endlessly, the love so true from he,
Destiny spreads its wings among the clouds.
And she will see the stars
she will see the flowers,
and their love will peacefully be,
the most precious thing known to their hearts,
so unconditionally..
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Written August 14th, 2005
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cheers 4 ur advice, and i'm really glad u liked it too! thankee huni xxxxxx
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OMG, that was a great finish..i have a little advice, change unconditional to, unconditionaly it just flows better, take it or leave it. great write.
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wow that was totally awosme, i cant wait till the rest of the poem. im kinda mad acually that i read it with out the rest of the poem done. but awsome so far. make sure you let me know when the rest of it is done so that i can applaud!! good job(so far).
-Sasha
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