crystal streams cascade
the music of the waterfalls
liquid poetry~
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Written January 3rd, 2003
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excellent
This is very calming. I love the idea of liquid poetry.
Great write and beautiful picture.
Ethereal Melody
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"crystal streams cascade" This line is beautiful! You did an excellent job! I loved this. The picture is radiant!
Great write!
~Kayla
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I love this form!This is quite a lovely poem. The imagery is beautiful A very enjoyable piece.This impresses great images upon the reader. The conjuring of pictures was excellent! Ver well executed piece!Sending you the best of wishes... ~genielassie~
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Hi Susan:
Beautiful piece of work. So vivid is the imagery and beautiful the words. Thanks for this beautiful write. Bill -
love the picture and the words that accompany it.
do you ever write unconventional haikus? i haven't learned how they work but the few that i've read were good. i thinkyou could write some nice ones. let me know if you've got any.
laurie. -
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beautiful, short, simple. -
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I'm not really a haiku person but this one is great. It's got so few words but gets right to the point. Seeing the picture and reading the words made me feel as if I was at the waterfall right now Great write.
~*Liska*~ -
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Very pretty! I love Haiku and you write it so well, I could feel the cool waters and hear them rushing.~Laura -
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ahh liquid poetry, so strong. -
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Pretty. I really liked this :):) -
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I love waterfalls, Wouldn't that picbe beautiful if it had fairies in it?
((((((((huggies))))))))
Brianna -
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Very beautiful Susan.
Flows like the water it portrays ... -
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Oh i lovvvvve this one love this:
liquid poetry~
Just beautiful hun, hugs, ~~ Ce -
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Aahh yumm sounds tastes and smells all vibrant from this scene -tj- -
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I LOVE this one...very much a fan of haiku...and waterfalls and this combines them both beautifully...Makes me feel like I am back in central new york walking the gorges and swimming in waterfal fed pools...just lovely...love ya, Ro -
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Everyone here as pretty much expressed my thoughts... such small words hold such a large beauty -
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this is lovely
i love waterfalls
the picture is just beautiful too -
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as a waterfall cascades so
do your elegant words sis, so do they
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WOW, WOW, WOW, really all i can say, ok, i can say more:
WONDERFUL
BEAUTIFUL
SO MUCH AWESOME IMAGERY
EXCELLENT
AMAZING
LOVELY
PERFECT
WOW, WOW, WOW
kayla* -
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Perfect haiku, Sis! Beautiful waterfall! (I love waterfalls..I have four pics' of waterfalls on the wall in my plant room.)
Love and Hugs,
Maureen -
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Lovely write Susan peace and love,Sherry -
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Amazingly beautiful, Susan:) I loved the ending, 'sacred poetry':):)
Love ya,
Karen -
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yes it is!
hugs,
jim -
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just beautiful Susan ;) and of course so is your pic
hugs~
Dawn -
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beautiful, and the pic is awesome as well :o) -
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very nice!! -
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that picture is wonderful...wow...and I thought I had some gorgeous waterfal pics...whew...wonderful ~~Jenn -
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OMG, Susan, the picture is beautiful, but it does not compete with the beauty of your words. -
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Although I'm not much into Haikus, this was...marvelous!
Luv,
Jess -
Thanks Kathy
Appreciate the comment hun
Susan~ -
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Don't dare touch this one LOL. It is beautiful and perfect. So few words, but it speaks volumns. The pictures is a wonderful effect as well.
~Kathy
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