I've cried
I've sobbed
I'm dead within
I guess you win
I never got all of your love
I placed you with all of mine
I never thought you would play me
Well now we know I was thinking crazy
Love is nothing
Simply a sort of fling
At least that's the way you see it
High school drama from a teenage boy
You're not the one who's extremely annoyed
Feeling so small
Feeling cut down, insignificant
Feeling unwanted, unattractive
Feeling like I have no hope left out there
Feeling as if no else around me doesn't even care
You are my bitterness
You upset me in so many ways
You told me I wasn't allowed to go out
You were the one who was playing the other
You can't be trusted when you pull this shit
As my view on love stands
There's nothing left of my heart
I had already given it all the you
But you didn't seem to care about me
Not half as much as I love you
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Written August 14th, 2005
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I really liked this one. I'm sorry that dude was a douche. This poem was heartfelt, and beautiful. i love how you write. -
very well written.
This is a sorrow filled reality poem that speaks of deception and pain. The sadness being felt is not so over-powering that one can not hear the tone of anger setting in also. This is written in your style Cutie, which is to say... heartfelt and flowing. Another poemed that reads very smoothly. Great write.
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