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i am ruth,

i think that it is best
if you don't squat upon

a porcupine.


even one that is superior at life.


well, maybe it is ok sometimes.

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written by ruth. really.
Written August 14th, 2005

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  • dim halo
    September 29, 2005
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    wow... i haven't read this before....
    definately an anne poem.
    who else would find it ok to sometimes squat on a porcupine?
    Love always
    Rafiki

  • anne
    August 23, 2005
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    i wish i could applaud this more than once. its brilliance is stunning.
    Edited on Aug 23, 6:11 because 'bad apostrophe'.

  • sarra
    August 17, 2005
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    no way, this is a total anne poem!

  • anne
    August 15, 2005
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    maybe not quite really.
    Edited on Aug 15, 3:08 p.m. because ''.

  • Wind Child
    August 15, 2005
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    Really?

    ayla

  • anne
    August 14, 2005
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    phenomenal.

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