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You Still...

You kill me every time,
Don't need to speak,
I understand why,
Even though, I was good.
You still kill...

You love me each day,
Saying you care.
With that laugh,
Don't worry, I know.
You still love...

You try all day and night,
Seeing just how far.
So I would give in,
But I am done now.
You still try...

You act like you care,
Although, that's  a lie.
Just as everything else,
Don't try to explain.
You still act...

You make me cry.
Saying "Please..."
And you just turn away,
Like I meant nothing.
I still cry...

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Written August 6th, 2005

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