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Screaming Silences and Deafening Whispers

You'll never know.
I can't tell you.
I'll never let it show.

But you've got me here,
Weak and thirsty,
Living life in fear.

So cover your ears and listen close
To the screams you'll never hear.
I swallowed them a long time ago,
Choked down for you, my dear.

The chaotic silence
Deafens me
And has killed me ever since...

But you'll never know.
I can't tell you.
I'll never let it show.

Author notes

umm... i dont really know what im talkin about...
Written August 13th, 2005

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  • flame8
    August 13, 2005
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    9.5/10 grunts

    chilling to say the least. very cool


  • LemonDropAngel
    August 13, 2005
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    great write slightly confusin but great job none the less


  • mysticlabyrinth
    August 13, 2005
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    thanks!


  • Fading Illusionist
    August 13, 2005
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    Cool, awesome write


  • mysticlabyrinth
    August 13, 2005
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    thank ya bunches


  • mysticlabyrinth
    August 13, 2005
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    thank you so so much!

  • classic disaster x3
    August 13, 2005
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    amazing

    Omg I'm speechless...I loved this...applause for you!


  • DarlingStac
    August 13, 2005
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    it sounded good.. and i think i know what your talking about.. it made sense to me..i thought it was great... it flowed so well.. and i loved it.. xoxo stac

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