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Prismatic




Just like a rainbow, I am prismatic.





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Complex
Written August 13th, 2005

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  • smoking gun
    November 28, 2005
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    your colors of red ,green,and purple haze wraped up in a fine linnen of french silk fresh as a morning dew ,have a good day---kirby
    Edited on Dec 16, 11:54 because ''.


  • August 15, 2005
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    fabulous

    being given only one line can be very limiting. I really enjoyed this (for lake of a better word) statement. Makes me smile. I love how there are many ways to interpret your meaning (be it obvious or otherwise). Fabulous


  • Celticmoon
    August 13, 2005
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    Glad you found it interesting. I do enjoy leaving people to think and wonder about me. And even if I do not win...I have already won simply because I have done what I set out to do...make you think.

  • fears of joy
    August 13, 2005
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    hmmmm.....that's an interesting line, its another one that makes me think about the author.