Why do I do the things I do?
Why am I this way?
Why am I prone to sin?
Why can't I be Happy with what i have?
Why do I always want more?
Why do I get what i want and then want something else instead?
Why do I leave a good man for a bad one?
Why do I always push him away?
Why am I who I am?
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Written August 13th, 2005
A contest entry
- I've Been Smudged........ by FlipperSwitch.
600 points, ended January 16, 2008, 15 entries
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Very common question, usually asked silently. Good idea to put it in poetry form, thanks for entering.
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Thanks again
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another great write *cheers* very good job very good. Keep it up like i told you in all the other comments. great work.
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Excellent
Excellent poem realy like it down to Earth. And thank's for your feed back's ill return the faver .Bishop P.S I hope that is not the only one you've read cos i can do down to eath as well lol. -
thanx for the comment but my poems aren't gd lol
o well...n i like this poem, can kind of relate xx
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