I ONCE WAS A FLAME
GLOWING IN THE DARK!
BUT NOW I'M A MEMORY
WATER DOUSED MY SPARK!
Author notes
Written August 13th, 2005
A contest entry
- I Once Was by qttjbaby.
300 points, ended August 16, 2005, 23 entries
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You hit it right on...Thank You!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thank you so much. I am just thrilled that everyone who has commented has been able to enjoy something from this. Everyone's comments have been so nice. And I think it's wonderful that your family participates in all of this together!
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Thanks... keep on rockin'
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Such a wonderful comment. Thank you so much!!!!!!!!
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Thanks!!!!!!!!!!
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Thank you Molly. I'm not sure where it came from... my head or my heart... but I can put alot of the present situations in my life into the metaphor, some good and some bad.
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Thank you very much!
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This is pretty cool, short and simple but entertaining and deep if you read between lines of this poem. excellent work.
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Amazing Job Here
WOW this is great I like this one alot your words are so amazing. I so hope to read more of your wonderful writes,and thank you for sharing this with my family and I. Keep up the awesome writing.
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Kick ass!
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Short and sweet. I love it when I run across these little poems, they just (if you'll pardon the pun) brighten my day! Well done, rhythm and rhyme is excellent, lol... keep up the great work!
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Lovely, it is enjoyably simple.
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Oh that is sad. This was really a great write. So sorry you are just a memory, but better to be a memory than the water that doused you I guess, if that even makes any sense. LOL, really this was good. thanks for sharing it.
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great job, thanks for entering and good luck
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THERE RISES AN ETERNAL FLAME
ON WINGS FROM ASHEN GROUNDS
YOUR LIGHT SHINES FOREVER
BECAUSE GOD'S LOVE ABOUNDS
Douse that! I love you!
Edited on Aug 14, 3:20 p.m. because ''.
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