You been with me since i was born
Even when i got poked with a thorn
You have always been there for me
When i needed you to be
You was with me when i had my disorder
And dieing was on the border
If u wished i wouldn't of lived
Its alright, i forgive
Is it hard
Tr yin to be there to guard
All four of us
And our first day of school watching us get on the bus
But i got older
And started to be a smoker
Ill admit the first time i smoked
I kind of choked
But it didn't stop me
Cause i felt free
I love you so much
And don't wanna lose touch
You have always been there for me
And that's the way i want it to always be!!
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Written August 12th, 2005
A contest entry
- Beauty in everything by new born.
525 points, ended October 30, 2008, 18 entries
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This is sweet and sad. I hope you and your mother maintain a close relationship all throughout your lives. Please read my rules again.
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Passionate
Oh, nice job but R U really smoking? If U r remember that it's really dangerous and ssometimes it evn kills -
Beautiful
Beautiful tribute to your mother. How wonderful is to feel her love and compassion, isnt it?? Great write Shannon. Keep up the good work!
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