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If Only You Knew

Somehow I Wish I Could
Tell You All My Feelings
Wishing You'd Understand
But I Know You Wont
So I Don't Tell a Soul
I Want To Tell You
How Your Voice Makes
Everything Seem Ok
How Your Touch
Melts My Cold Heart
I Keep These Feelings
Safe In My Heart
Scared To Tell You
I Sit And Watch You Love Others
If Only You Knew

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To No One Really.
Written August 12th, 2005

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  • Am8ur
    March 1, 2007

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    another great write. i have noticed you havent written very much lately. why is that? i would love to read something new you have a real gift! i love reading your work. it all seems so precious. it reminds me of when i was a teen. not that it was that long ago really lol. i am only 26 lol, however i do feel and live like a 30+ yr old lol. i have 4 kids and i am a house wife lol. not anything too exciting lol.
    hope to see more from you soon.
    Til

  • Dark Eagle
    August 22, 2005
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    easily relateable

    beautifully written It is very easy for many people to relate to. keep up the good writing.

    ~<3~Bobby~<3~

  • RandomPoetGirl
    August 13, 2005
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    Hi, this is awesome. A lot of people can relate.

  • Astaraelneth
    August 12, 2005
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    Hey, this is great! I know how you feel, i really do. I used to feel the same way...anyway, i really like this poem keep it up!