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Geeks are HOt!

 

Geeks are HOt!

 

delectable
lurking in the shadows
they are
working up their feeble nerves
for a chance with you...

 

brutes will burst through
who think they’re cool
but it’s the geeks
who hold you in rapture...

 

so down the hall
look into the shadows
there may be a geek in there
for you...

 

they’re really not bad-
they do what you want,
don’t talk back,
take all your crap,
what more could you ask?!!!

 

So go to a geek fest
and be queen for a day
leave the cool dudes to stray
like the mongrel dogs they are!

 

Geeks are HOt!
remember...
shadows...

Author notes

This poem developed while IM'ing with my AP wife, Torn Chakra... who defended them thus!
Written August 12th, 2005

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  • wbiro gold member
    August 15, 2005
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    Thanks, Amy! So unloved??? Well, here...
    some love in here to a sweet girl who lives in hell!
    Now if you aren't in an AP family soon... I will adopt you myself! Sleep, thanks for reminding me... goodnight!


  • Porcelain Doll
    August 15, 2005
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    LMFAO! i'm not a geek. I'm a nerd. There's a difference. I feel so unloved ... *laughs, cries, then passes out* Nyeh, I need to learn how to get some sleeeppppp... yup ^.^ Awesome poem! I love this! Eeee keep penning I love everything you write ^.^
    ~Amy

  • wbiro gold member
    August 13, 2005
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    thanks for the comment, angel! Glad you like geeks!

  • wbiro gold member
    August 13, 2005
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    thank you, Eyez! icky stuffs! lol


  • Wulf-Eyez De Winter gold member
    August 13, 2005
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    Very cute....lol.....
    Hugs and icky stuffs,
    Cassie

  • nolonger
    August 13, 2005
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    Awwwwwwww what a wonderful reply Thank you, and yes, Now that I look close It does look HoOtter
    yummy eh?? thank you
    always
    ~ vini ~
    Edited on Aug 13, 9:07 because ''.


  • wbiro gold member
    August 13, 2005
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    Yes, my day is complete now, vinillalace! I will watch and hold and cuddle with your little clappy guy jumping up and down all day and I will pretend it is YOU because... dare I say in front of the world... you are YUMMY!

    and thank you for the English lesson, Mrs. Lace. But the little itty-bitty t was artistic, I thought! you know, that big, giant O, it makes the big, giant O look bigger- and hotter!
    your adoring AP granddad wbiro

  • nolonger
    August 13, 2005
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    did I applaud?

  • nolonger
    August 13, 2005
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    One... last line. " hot " The T was lowecase
    ...............
    next.........
    ........
    KICK ASS I love this, yes, can I have a geek please, because im sick of the other men who want me for a day and toss me away, open there mouth with discusting things they say
    Jerks
    know what
    My turn to hurt-
    somone other then myself
    I have to lern to beat them at their own game
    awesome write hun
    as always
    I need your brain
    Always
    ~ vini ~
    Edited on Aug 13, 8:52 because 'forgot hugggssssss and kissessssss'.

  • Ari Ro
    August 12, 2005
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    lol I love geeks. They're so shmexy. This was awesome! Keep up the good work, and defend all nerds and geeks!

    ~Bishonenkoi


  • SexyAngel0418
    August 12, 2005
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    HEY AP Daddy!!! You did a great job!!! I think geeks are hott too!!! WOOO HOOO... LOL... This is awesome!!!

    Hugs,
    Beth

    PS I'm still here, just a lil slow at reading new posts... LOL


  • Touchof1der silver member
    August 12, 2005
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    I ummm... Hmmm... Yeah. I suppose there's a good reason for this. Scratches head. Just can't quite figure out what it is yet. You must be a lot of fun when you lighten up.


  • B Chandler
    August 12, 2005
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    lol u know what im just gonna leave that alone but anyways this is a real good write and the flow was just superb keep up the good work
    Rae

  • wbiro gold member
    August 12, 2005
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    Well, my Significant , I gave you due credit in the author's comments!

  • Mrs. Dumas silver member
    August 12, 2005
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    GEEKS ARE VERY HOTT!

    GEEKS ARE HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! They will always be hot to me because they are so mysterious! Oh what a great write! I may have to write something on this too! LOL! Great job!

    WHOOHOO! Party for geeks!

    Love ya
    Jess


  • lavender shadows
    August 12, 2005
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    lol, this is hilarious! I'm sorry, but the title just totally drew me in. But not all geeks are hot though... take me for instance! lol

    Anyhow, your poem is so truthful. I totally love it! I needed this today... actually, I probably need this everyday! lol

    Anyhow, great work on this Dad, I loved it!

    Your AP Daughter ,
    Christina
    (aka, ~lavender shadows~)


  • befree
    August 12, 2005
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    Ha, this is hilarious. It brought me the image of the dorks at the dance in Sixteen Candles. Geeks are the way to go. What a fun poem, nice job.

  • JETS jets jets jets
    August 12, 2005
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    I really enjoyed this poem, it was light uplifting and funny.
    Keep up the good work.

  • Dull Red
    August 12, 2005
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    true, true.


  • Shamisen
    August 12, 2005
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    Amen to that. Geeks have brains and quirks which are so desireable! Hmmm...I wonder if Eugene won Big Brother...


  • wbiro gold member
    August 12, 2005
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    Well, Molly! I didn't think this poem was that deep!!! I should at least give you an applause for your writer's cramp!!!


  • ICULookn
    August 12, 2005
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    This is truly a great one. If gave me smiles, alughter and made me think as well . you have done well with this and it most certainly fits its Category perfect!

    ICULookn

  • Molly Densmore silver member
    August 12, 2005
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    Excellent, I have found this to be true in my life that I have seen, the good looking drop dead goregous men (like my first husband) was a jerk and treated me and our son terribly. So I come to learn that maybe the not so good looking, but really nice men (geeks or not) treat you better. Your write was a great insight on how some men are. I'm sure there is good looking nice men. But in my case, every good looking guy I dated was a jerk and very vain. Bravo for the geeks and the okay looking men out there, they make great husbands and treat there women like gold. In most cases anyway. there are jerks everywhere no matter their looks. You have to screen through them. Great write, I think i have said too much now. Thanks for sharing this.


  • Tipp
    August 12, 2005
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    geeks are pretty hot... lol.. good writing! keep it up ~~Ducki...


  • kkatie55
    August 12, 2005
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    Excellent

    lol this is funny and true at the same time ...it was a delight to read..very unique...it is a change from alot of sorrow I have been reading..keep ur the good writing...peace

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