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Ode to School...

School O school,
You make me drool,
You're not fun,
We can't chew bubblegum!
School O school,
Your slaves are mean,
The worst is to be seen,
Why O why can't you be fun,
So we can play out in the sun!
School O school,
I wish that i could run away,
I wish that every single day!
School O school,
I love you sometimes,
But, it's not often in one day,
At two different times,
Recess and holiday!!!



Author notes

This option, as you can clearly see, is option #3!
Please note that school's slaves are the teachers! And that this poem isn't for american schools! it's for french schools where the teachers don't encourage you and say that you're a bad student!
hope you like this poem!!!

Dee Dreamer


Written August 12th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • St-Rebel
    June 21, 2006
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    lol!! I LUV THIS POEM! DOWN WITH SCHOOL!! when i first saw the title i thought it would be about luving schoo..U FOOLED MEH!!! LOL School is cruel though!

  • Alice In Wonderland
    September 13, 2005
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    uhh, Dee...Ode is when u write about something u like or at least i think.


  • crownedjewel4Jesus
    August 18, 2005
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    School oh school, isn't is cruel? lol, this was really good, I enjoyed. Keep it up!


  • senza
    August 14, 2005
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    LOL!!! Cool! nice rhymes and desperate exclamations. cya dee


  • simplepoet
    August 12, 2005
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    i liked how you ended this poem with exclamations, love the emotion.

  • Choc O late
    August 12, 2005
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    Good job
    COMING!
    Soz

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