choking
on clouds of blackness
smothering me
and i fall
bruising lungs blackened
charred deep inside
crumbling apart, these remains did break
did crack
(inflaming me)
burning me in fire
flicking across my cold skin
screaming
pain as it envelopes every lasting thought
sense of the mind
(nerves)
not even the wind blew
as the world fell apart
burning us all
hurting us all
(killing us)
not the leaves did they fall
the peace was unsettling
as we vanished
(one by one)
for... not even the wind blew
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Written August 12th, 2005
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Wow, this was really interesting and creative. I was hooked till the end. Your vivid descriptions made my mind flow with images as I read. You have done well with this and I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing it.
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