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LOVING YOU (Acrostic)

LOVING YOU

Lost in your warm embrace

Only your touch can fulfill

Voracious, my hunger can't be quelled

Inside of me, every nerve electrified

Nectar is the taste of your sweet lips

Gingerly they touch my soul


You're my world, I'm sure of that

Only you will see my

Unending thoughts of loving you


 


Joyce Le Lievre (sunny day)

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My love for you is never ending, we took our vows and they will last more than this lifetime. They are eternal, just like my love for you.
Written August 11th, 2005

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  • freespirit51
    January 27, 2007

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    Beautiful piece. The love in your words is very powerful. I love the emotions as well. Great work.

    I would however line up your acrostic to the left. Makes viewing the first letters easier.


    • sunny day
      January 28, 2007
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      spirit, Thank you for coming back to my older work. I don't know why I didn't left align this piece. Maybe because I had only been here for a month at that point. I just edited it though. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this piece I did for my loving husband. Love and God bless, Joyce

  • KennaB
    August 18, 2005
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    Beautiful

    Absolutely sweet and heartfelt and moving!!! You have had the amazing experience of finding and keeping love with a great man. Your love for him is shown so well through your poetry. I am so happy for you. Love is something that you cannot live without once you experience it, and you will never be without that love. Congrats on your beautiful love!!!

  • sunny day
    August 18, 2005
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    Ashleigh, Thank you so much for the applause and the wonderful coment. It is a wonderful feeling for sure. I hope you have found your soulmate as I did. Thank you again. Joyce


  • HisOneTrueLove6107
    August 18, 2005
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    This is a beautiful contribute to your love. I felt a lot of the emotion you felt, only for my boyfriend here. He is perfect in every way and he goes and tells me I'm beautiful every chance he gets. Beautiful poem and Keep up the good writing
    Ashleigh


  • SeptemberFaith
    August 15, 2005
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    explore explore explore, there is so much to learn here at AP, especially from the people

  • sunny day
    August 15, 2005
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    Criss, Thank you for the applause and the lovely comment you just gave to me. I find these to be so catchy. But I still want to explore other styles as well. Again thank you so much, your words are greatly appreciated. Joyce

  • SeptemberFaith
    August 15, 2005
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    This is so beautiful and the love behind it gives me butterflies. I always hope to find a love like the one you have. This is one of my favorite forms to write in (since I think forms are evil) this one I like

    very well done,

    Criss

  • sunny day
    August 12, 2005
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    Dawn, Thank you for the lovely comment. It is the love for my husband and the words of other poets that are inspiring me to continue doing this. I will have to look at some of your works so that I can return the inspiration. Thank you again.
    Joyce (sunny day)


  • DawnBaby
    August 12, 2005
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    Great

    Beautiful tribute to someone special, acrostics are great, good job on this, well written and charming!

  • sunny day
    August 12, 2005
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    Swan, Thank you so much for those words. They mean a lot to me as do all the praise that is given by other poets within AP. Thank you so much for the applause too.I really wish I had started writing earlier in life as I love to read poems so much. I just never thought I would be able to do something like this. The words of praise from people like yourself are really making me believe that I can do this.
    Thank you again. Joyce
    Edited on Aug 12, 2:00 because ''.

  • swanpool
    August 12, 2005
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    Very clever I said you had a talent for these acrostic poems the other day when I read your poem 'poetry'. Well done and keep it up I look forward to reading more in the future.

  • sunny day
    August 12, 2005
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    DU, Thank you for the lovely comment. It was only my second attempt at an acrostic, but I really enjoy doing them. As for the inspiration behind it, that was a great help in finding the words to go with the title. My soulmate he is and will always be my guiding light in this sometimes dark world. I have to say WOW back for the praise you showed me. That is an inspiration to continue, thank you so much. Joyce


  • DamnUnique
    August 12, 2005
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    WOW! this is so beautifully written....i always think that acrostics are one of the hardest poetic forms but i really love them....as for your work,it deserves a standing ovation! i really liked the imagery you've used...it gives the poem a very remarkable appeal.
    and your love is very evident from this wonderful verse you've penned down...
    keep writing!

  • sunny day
    August 12, 2005
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    Molly, Thank you for the lovely comment. I enjoyed sharing this as it is how I feel. Your words of praise make it even more worthwhile. I so enjoy reading your works too. Big !
    Joyce


  • sunny day
    August 12, 2005
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    Thank you for the comment and applause it is greatly appreciated. Joyce (sunny day)


  • August 12, 2005
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    Nicely done!

  • Molly Densmore silver member
    August 12, 2005
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    This was so very beautiful and how you used the words "loving you", so well written and the words of love so wonderfully beautiful. I just loved this and enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing it.

  • sunny day
    August 11, 2005
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    Thank you very much sis...only my second acrostic. Did one for poetry so I had to do one for Jeff of course. I'm glad you liked it ! Joyce
    Edited on Aug 12 because ''.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    August 11, 2005
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    awesome poem

    whowww!! very nice..

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