Little miss emo
Hunny you're a mess
Make-up smeared
From your tears
Dried up blood
Eternally stuck to your wrists
Ahh...you make me sick...
When will you realize
There is more to life than
Your dark little corner
More than your shiny little blade
Black your eyes baby
As dark as they can go
Bleach out your skin
Stay hidden from the light
Is anyone alive? Hello....
When will you realize
That there is more than
Living Suicide.
Author notes
grr...i hate emo people.
Written August 11th, 2005
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I did find it very well-written, though not really funny. You would be my hero if you wrote me something based on this:
http://www.ebaumsworld.com/video/watch/7199/
If you dislike the emos, you'll die laughing:P
♥ Laura, aka Immortal ♥
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You have this under the humor category. I found nothing funny about this piece. Although, It was well written. It said alot. Very true to, about what you said. Sick in the head perhaps?
Wonderful write. Thank you for sharing. You take care now. 
victoria
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The only help they need, is the help of themselves realzing that they dont need to do all of that to get attention, because they more than likely already have it.
Some have serious problems...but they are very rare cases. -
many times these such people that you speak of...just need some help...and maybe that is what you can do...is be accpeting and offer an outelt...altough...some epople refuse to be help...for them...all we can do is pray...
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Cutting is over rated. People who really have a problem with cutting keep it to themselves. The people i'm talking about in this poem do it publicly to get attention.
That annoys the crap out of me. -
I really like this poem! It's very touching! I don't know any emos, but I could understand. I hate ppl going around saying they cut themselves! Great poem! Keep up the terrific work!
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that was a really great poem, it was amazing. but not all people who cut are emo. but yeah. i'm sick and tired of people walking around and calling themselves emo and shit like that. but i thought your poem explained a lot of your hatred passion for some people like this. awesome.
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