With seeking hot hands
hidden passion stirred in me
please touch me~
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Written January 1st, 2003
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I wanted to start to learn about Japanese writing styles and fell on this - eastern elegance, universal passion and a wonderfully nuanced last line - I thought this very graceful - Beautiful
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This is a lovely Haiku. I love these types of poems that don't need very many words to get the message across. And you definitely got your message across quite well. Too many words kill the mood any way.
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Oh...Very nice...Short, but I loved the pic.
Showed Intimacy...Thanks for letting me know about you. And I'm sure you are a wonderful wife
--Thanks for sharing this--
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hehe.....very hot (what else can I say?)
((((((((((((huggies))))))))))
Brianna -
don't touch it!
Strong, to the point, and hot with passion... Great job..
(((HUGS)))
Pat -
don't touch it!
There to help out Susan with extended hand -tj- -
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It sure don't hurt to ask. Very hot!!! -
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Touch is so powerful! Without touch, babies die. I think adults do, too! Beautiful poem, Sis!
Lots of Hugs,
Maureen -
don't touch it!
Hot stuff! Less says more. The magic of touch and could be related in so many different ways as well. On a liter note I'm thinking of the little children behind me in church who can't resist touching my hair.
Well done :)
~Mary O -
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oh my Susan this is sensual indeed...whew And I adore this pic...it was perfect for this write
Hugs~
Dawn -
don't touch it!
ooh, awesome! so simple, I think it's in your prettiest voice. almost childlike, a second childhood. The woman looks up to this man, bows to him. But she isn't afraid of him, well...maybe a little. -
don't touch it!
wow sis too hot to handle this one is. I don't think it will cool down any either. Love you alots. Happy happy New Year, wishing us both the best of health. May God keep his eyes on us both too. He does have plans for us sis, really. -
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ohhh susan...powerfully sensual without detail...whew...wow...hey i want that picture...I swear I am stealing all your pics...you have to tell me where you find all of them darn it...lol...~~Jenn -
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Wow Susan could feel the yearning in this piece you captured the feelings of wanting Himor in the muse really well I don't even have a man not fair LOL........ you should dedicate this one to your hubby hehehe but you wrote this well :O) Sherry
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C'mon and touch me, babe
don't you know that I am not afraid
LOL, Susan, you put The Doors in my head!
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Hmmm sensual indeed hun and great piccie too, love it...You be well ok??? hugs, ~~ Ce -
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oh whoo hoo!! I would touch ya hehhe j/k very nice hun -
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Ooooo...very sexy I must say! I like. =)
Jess -
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My my my....very sensual...I really like this one alot Susan...gave me the shivers....:) Hugs, Ro -
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this is really good, i liked it, well written
kayla*
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