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secrets are personal

Secrets are what make life personal
Secrets can come sharp and someimes dull

Secrets make feelings and meanings
secrets creat poems and human beings

Secrets can be no fun
Secrets can hurt someone

but most of all
Secrets are VERY Personal

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Written August 11th, 2005

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  • Xx Thorn xX
    August 12, 2005
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    Your such a loser! lol but i wuv ya
    Edited on Aug 12, 6:29 p.m. because ''.


  • AmoreEMorte
    August 11, 2005
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    oh geez-kill me if I say that again...lol


  • AmoreEMorte
    August 11, 2005
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    keep rollin out the silly sweet rhymes Madi!!!

  • AmoreEMorte
    August 11, 2005
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    I dun think hyrt is a werd...niether iz werd...or iz...but who cares? the way you misspell tells lots boutcha! lol

  • ReaperDance
    August 11, 2005
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    True dat sista ue dat!! Thas pimp mate thas pimp!! 100% Madi!! XD You put hyrt instead of hurt unless hyrt is a word.. *Confused* : :


  • CrypticBard
    August 11, 2005
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    Well said!
    And oh so true :_)
    thanks for sharing.


  • AmoreEMorte
    August 11, 2005
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    great write You are such a good poetess


  • AmoreEMorte
    August 11, 2005
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    Well Madison, I have to agree with you. Every line is true. Brill write.

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