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W....What have I done?

W..What Have I done this time



I thought I promised



                      I did it again?




        No it cant be?      Could it?



Blood trickles down my wrist but its too much to take
to take in what I have done must be a mistake

     What have I done to myself?
Most importantly how will it affect you?

Author notes

OMG HOW COULD I DO THIS AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Written August 11th, 2005

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  • ReaperDance
    August 11, 2005
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    I think tis is an awesome poem chicka!! You hae someMMMMaaaaDDDD skill!! I wuv you ttyl


  • AmoreEMorte
    August 11, 2005
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    The regret of your actions, huh? Well I can understand that madi. I have too many regrets to mention. I think that this poem was good. You showed well what you felt. I hope that everything works out for you.


  • Xx Thorn xX
    August 11, 2005
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    Thanks so much


  • love turned violent
    August 11, 2005
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    Aww

    Cutting, I know how it is. This is a good poem. Its the after thoughts. You're sort of lost for words at how you've allowed yourself to cut again. keep writting. & good luck <3 J.
    Be sure and read some of my poetry as well.