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Littlest Angels

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The littlest angels have tiny wings
their voices whisper as they sing
singing of Heaven and God's great love
spreading happiness in Heaven above

Wings so tiny they can not fly far
evenings they carry moonbeams in a jar
shining their lights, singing God's songs
showing the lost soul where they belong

Sometimes as the angels fly all around
they fly too high and tumble down
their little bottoms never get sore
soft puffy clouds cover Heaven's floor  

The littlest angels have fun all day
laughter echoing as they run and play
disappearing into the clouds at night
playing hide and seek till morning light

Each morning little angels gather to pray
they listen to each word God has to say
their prayers puts a smile upon His face
the angels thank God for a heavenly place

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Written August 11th, 2005

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  • darlee77
    September 23, 2005
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    awesome

    This is awesome. It is so sweet and gentle. I especially love the third verse. This would be so pretty framed for a childs' room. The imagery is so wonderful, I can just picture these tiny beings flittering around, cavorting and having fun.
    A wonderful work. Darlee77

  • faderman1959
    August 12, 2005
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    This is absolutely wonderful! As the other person said it is like a lullaby. The story you told and the picture you painted were terrific! This has to be the best angel poem I have ever read! Thnak you!

  • agalford7053
    August 12, 2005
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    Mum,
    This is really cute. I love angels. I have angels all over my bedroom. But they don't even come close to real ones. Angels are so precious. And you described the little angels so well. I love this.
    God Bless
    ~ashley~

  • Arsenic-
    August 12, 2005
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    Oh Sandygram, that was so sweet....painted a very soft and lovable picture.
  • Linda Sue silver member
    August 11, 2005
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    4 Halos! * * * *

    Sandy, This is so cute. The picture, the rhyme, the words....just perfect. You have to find a contest for this one. I loved the lines:

    Sometimes as the angels fly all around
    They fly too high and tumble down.
    Their little bottoms never get sore
    Soft puffy clouds cover Heaven's floor.

    Just brilliant!!! Linny
    Edited on Aug 11, 5:33 p.m. because ''.
  • amz my heart
    August 11, 2005
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    All I can say is brovo...a great poem and the added picture..I`ll see and hear this one in my dreams!!! Thanks so much for sharing..xoxox

  • Donjo1030
    August 11, 2005
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    beautiful

    Beautiful write Sandy!!!!
    This so cute what nice prayer and lullabye all in one. You can picture those little angel up in heaven just sitting there intently listen to God. We know how God loves the little children and His little angels too. Praise God!!!! BRAVO!!!
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