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Finale

a gargantuan weight
 finally lifted off
for once a sense of
 accomplishment
flows through my veins

  walking right through
the malicious city -
  head high
   
           - Triumphant


Author notes

One of the most important tasks of my life - Finally completed and now I can move on...
Written August 11th, 2005

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    August 11, 2005
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    oh bravo! very powerfully penned. Makes me want to scream "hell yeah!" Great one hun! Gypsy


  • Imokon
    August 11, 2005
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    YHEAUS! WHOO!

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    August 11, 2005
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    I am proud of you for completing and moving on. Wonderfully inspiring piece!


  • transcendental baby gold member
    August 11, 2005
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    Kudo!!!!! for you!!!! Live well and prosper my dear Pi ... and fly high
    Edited on Aug 11, 11:15 because 'those usual typos '.