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Wakened

a short-lived journey
on it I sojourn today
first blossoms wakened



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Image credits - 1800flowers
Written August 11th, 2005

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  • J Rhys Davies
    August 24, 2005
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    This was so very technically sound and beautiful at the very same time. I truly love it when members of this site do that. It just puts a smile on my face. I think you did a lovely job with this.

    ~ John


  • transcendental baby gold member
    August 11, 2005
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    Fly high


  • Pisces Pond
    August 11, 2005
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    yep yep..finally!!!

  • transcendental baby gold member
    August 11, 2005
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    Sounds like your plane took off


  • Imokon
    August 11, 2005
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    Let's here it for another spring in fall!

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