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Faith

It was PM
In the back of the house the news was asking me " If I know where my children are?"
As I think about it now
I don't
I'm searching the house
Frantically
To try and find a number for one of their friends
But there are none
I start to panic
Why can't I remember
I run into the kitchen
And I trip over a phone book
I look down to pick it up
A page is dog-eared at the top
I open it slowly
And I read
Dr.Marilyn Kirk, Abortion office
I sink back down into my lazy boy chair
And softly say
"I do know where my children are"

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Written August 10th, 2005

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  • MyDecember
    August 11, 2005
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    this is a bit weird, im not sure if im getting it right, are you a mother and your daughter is getting an abortion or are you a daughter who had an abortion? either way, wicked poem. totally got the panicy feeeling while reading it.

    p.l.


  • Ditched-again
    August 11, 2005
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    That was really great Vicki. You had me there for a minute. Well done. Keep writing.


  • Amethystdawn2058
    August 10, 2005
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    To change the color of your font click on the words my poetry underneath your id name on the right hand courner of the page. The scroll down to your poem titled faith. Click on faith. Next to the title faith should be the timy word edit. click in edit and click on change the background that will allow you to change the color.


  • Amethystdawn2058
    August 10, 2005
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    I can't read this very well because of the color of the font blends in with the background.